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February 4th, 2009, 11:04 pm

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Reply jacob the comicmaker, February 4th, 2009, 11:06 pm

Kinda slow update. Boring I know, but me and Kanos are discussing a very intreasting side plot. so hopefully more fun soon.

Reply Shard, February 4th, 2009, 11:18 pm

Spelling/Grammar errors galore~

Panel 1- Generally fine, but it could be "have to talk to the humans", and the I'll should have a capital I.

Panel 2- "Expect me back in an hour, maybe two."
"Be safe, dear."

'Panel' 3- Meanwhile, in the outer tunnels...

Panels 4 & 5 are fine.

Panel 6- "One sentry... A waste of our time. Why are we doing this?"
"'Cause no one else is. Stop complaining and move your ass..."

Panel 7- "A day in and Arnaud can't even motivate his soldiers. Anyone else thinking we're screwed?"

EDIT: OH! And this should be "306", not 305.

Reply Afroman17, February 4th, 2009, 11:30 pm

shards comment is longer then the whole comic

Reply jacob the comicmaker, February 5th, 2009, 12:00 am

Not by much since she's just repeating the comic but only with corrections.

Oh, will fix tommorrew.

Reply Foxxy Matt (Guest), February 5th, 2009, 4:06 am

All the captains but Matt? What's he doing? .,.

Reply G.I.U.L.I.O., February 5th, 2009, 5:00 am

Slow update..Ah well, the next few updates will be interesting, I'm sure. =D

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