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April 28th, 2008, 11:40 pm

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Reply jacob the comicmaker, April 28th, 2008, 11:43 pm

* sleeping*

Reply Shard, April 28th, 2008, 11:50 pm

GRAMMAR/SPELLING CHECK 1st Panel- In "not to take things to fast", the second "to" should be "too"; "alot" should be "a lot". And "thats" should be "that's".

2nd Panel- Zaiko should have a "-" to indicate him being cut off.

3rd Panel- "i'll" should have a capital I. "Were" should be "We're".

4th Panel- There should be a comma after "Hey", and a question mark instead of the second exclamation point.

5th, 6th Panels- Nothing to fix =)

Reply jacob the comicmaker, April 28th, 2008, 11:52 pm

I'll do it tommorew unless Kiki does it.

Reply Shard, April 29th, 2008, 5:07 pm

Tommorew

Spelled "T-O-M-O-R-R-O-W."

Tomorrow.

=D

Reply jacob the comicmaker, April 29th, 2008, 5:08 pm

>.>

* Mutters* grammer nazie

Reply Ace (Guest), April 29th, 2008, 5:10 pm

YOU'RE SICK SHARD.

SICK.

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