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December 23rd, 2007, 9:55 pm

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Reply jacob the comicmaker, December 23rd, 2007, 9:55 pm

Didnt work very hard on this one....I really need some tips on making comics...any suggestions...

Dont forget to comment on the comic to...

Reply WolflanDarkwolf, December 23rd, 2007, 10:04 pm

nice

Reply Crescent Moon, December 23rd, 2007, 10:13 pm

Try grammar, sprites sort of looking they were in the exact same place in the next panel if they were just standing, and the dead body in the first panel.
Not tryin to sound mean, or anythin.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, December 23rd, 2007, 10:43 pm

Try Grammer isnt very precise....I thought I was already over that....whats is exeltly wrong? Hold on i'll fix the bodies.

Reply Shard, December 23rd, 2007, 11:05 pm

First panel, Tails' "Their" should be "They're". Third panel, I believe it's "then". Otherwise, you're good.

Reply stoopidmahn, December 23rd, 2007, 11:07 pm

i'd like to cameo plz.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, December 23rd, 2007, 11:11 pm

Oh ist the their there stuff....I thougt my comic was riddled with grammer mistakes....

Oh and knock yourself out mate....Give me the sprites and the bio and i'll cemeo you..

Reply WolflanDarkwolf, December 24th, 2007, 12:09 am

may I please cameo please jacob?

Reply jacob the comicmaker, December 24th, 2007, 12:16 am

Like I said, Sprites bio = Cemeos for you

Sooooo GIMMMI GIMMMI YOUR SPRITES AND BIO

Reply WolflanDarkwolf, December 24th, 2007, 12:43 am

Sprite:
http://omfgzombies.smackjeeves.com/comics/275785/sprite-update-wolf/ and what do you mean by bio all my guy does is either drink or does work as merc and is a loner not much more to him!

Reply Slash Segary, December 24th, 2007, 1:53 pm

You would need like a description of his past or something more like his personality would be good since he has to portary your character they best he can and knowing the personality would help a whole lot

Reply jacob the comicmaker, December 24th, 2007, 4:12 pm

Poor Terra never did that....and look at what happened to her...

Drowned in lava, not a good way to go.

Reply Afroman17, December 24th, 2007, 7:35 pm

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