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May 27th, 2007, 5:00 pm

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Reply Glandorthehedgehog, May 27th, 2007, 5:03 pm

I WOULD TOTTALLY DO THAT!

Reply Gold the hedgehog, May 27th, 2007, 5:15 pm

He's not an idiot!
Gold:what does "haircut"mean?

Reply Comik Radd, May 27th, 2007, 6:27 pm

There I am...
Jeez. Took ya' long enough Jacob. LOL.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 27th, 2007, 6:38 pm

Everyone shows up sometime....It migh6 take a while though......

Reply ...Miles..., May 27th, 2007, 7:02 pm

LOL THAT was a good one. This is probably my favorite addition to date.

Some minor grammar errors though:

panel 2: "And THEN we..." (as opposed to THAN)

panel 3: "Mr. Miles..." (not MR Miles)

Panel 4: It's a little redundant to say "One of his foxes that works for him." You should probably shorten it to "One of his foxes..." or "One of the foxes that works for him."

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 27th, 2007, 7:14 pm

Ok fixed any more proplems

Reply Shard, May 27th, 2007, 7:35 pm

You keep saying "Am" instead of "I'm"...

Reply Afroman17, May 27th, 2007, 8:21 pm

why Iam I helping you guys again

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 27th, 2007, 8:56 pm

Lure them into a false sense of security?

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 27th, 2007, 8:57 pm

I'll fix it Shard

Reply turbo_da_hedgehog, May 27th, 2007, 9:05 pm

Glandor thinks he's getting sued...HAHAHA

Reply ...Miles..., May 27th, 2007, 9:50 pm

While the "am" thing is technically a grammatical error, I think it fits Glandor's personality.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 27th, 2007, 9:53 pm

Should I keep it?

Reply Ryan and the chickens, May 28th, 2007, 12:33 am

"I WASN'T EVEN THERE!"

That was priceless. xD

Reply Afroman17, May 28th, 2007, 12:49 am

..............false security....?...there must be a better reason...like good is stupid to let an evil rogue run their base

Reply ...Miles..., May 28th, 2007, 8:48 am

And you call me a villain for trying to break away from these imbeciles <_<

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 28th, 2007, 10:10 am

Well Ray if you tell me your goals than i'll try to come up with a good reason

Reply ...Miles..., May 28th, 2007, 12:36 pm

My impression was that they had to band together to fight the humans, and Ray was in charge simply because he could kill anyone who tried to oppose his ascendancy.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, May 28th, 2007, 12:38 pm

that too....

Reply turbo_da_hedgehog, May 28th, 2007, 2:53 pm

am I every going to appear again or was it just a 1 time cameo?

Reply Afroman17, May 28th, 2007, 3:37 pm

I want to kill like Itachi or gaara...not be an evil leader like hitler

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