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March 27th, 2007, 4:04 pm

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Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:05 pm

Miles and glandor are not on first terms with eachother!

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 4:37 pm

Do you mind it when I point out syntax errors? I don't want to be rude...

For the record, you said more clearer in the last panel.

Reply Gold the hedgehog, March 27th, 2007, 4:37 pm

am i allowed to agree with miles AND glandor?

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:41 pm

Well i'll need your sprites.

And miles yes please point out mistakes it helps alot...

So hit me with the corrections please

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:47 pm

And miles what was my mistake in clearer thing? I thought I spelled that right

Reply Gold the hedgehog, March 27th, 2007, 4:47 pm

if your talking to me,here they are.


http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=silveradvneoxgoldnh0.png

they're a littttle wonky.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:48 pm

Yea one more person to my comic :)

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:49 pm

And Terra there are alot of humans.....Some have power weakenings guns

Reply Gold the hedgehog, March 27th, 2007, 4:50 pm

also,i faved this comic after reading the 2nd comic.

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:53 pm

Thanks....

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 4:56 pm

it should be "more clear" or just "clearer". I forget how to phrase that exactly... something like not having a superlative following something indicating greater than or less than.

Also, in the second panel, you say the humans have "token..." as opposed to taken,

And the "your" in the sixth panel should be "you're."

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 4:59 pm

Missed the your again...Ok fixing

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 5:03 pm

Ok fixed

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 5:10 pm

Last panel should be "you're an,"

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 5:24 pm

FIXEED...Anless am have to put in the ,. If so i'll do that later

Reply Glandorthehedgehog, March 27th, 2007, 5:25 pm

I am a part of the jedi council for petes' sake!!!

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 5:30 pm

When you're the last jedi, that only means so much.

Reply Glandorthehedgehog, March 27th, 2007, 5:31 pm

Well...Yeah that is a good point...At least I dont get affected by a jedi mind trick!!!

Cendar: *using mind trick* you will sweep my floors for me!

Glandor: I will sweep your floors for you...

Me: now I know why I found myself sweeping cendars' floors!

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 5:52 pm

The hedgehogs are doomed

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 6:31 pm

Yay! *does a little dance*

Stupid rodents!

Reply jacob the comicmaker, March 27th, 2007, 6:54 pm

I wouldnt say that....Without the hedgehogs numbers we would be died already

Reply ...Miles..., March 27th, 2007, 7:04 pm

*stops dancing*

*pouting* Stupid rodents...

Reply Afroman17, March 28th, 2007, 3:02 pm

I for got to do the eyes and face on my looking up sprites....>_>...damn it

Reply scytheholder, April 26th, 2007, 2:19 pm

Glandor is not respected

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